In this image I chose to show myself at a particular angle to represent a stature of maturity. Black is a color commonly associated with power and endurance. Black backgrounds demand attention to the portrait or foreground. The way your chin is tilted up or down is an example of body language to show superiority. No exact expression is portrayed here. However, my picture doesn't tell a story but only what I wish to perceive myself as."'But what is the story in the painting?"
"His paintings don't tell stories.'"(91)
Through my high school years, there will be many obstacles to overcome to help me reach my desired self. I wish to put myself out there in uncomfortable situations so that I can get more used to them. "Strangers would think I was calm."(1) I need to show more of my personality in an open environment instead of my select group of friends. Things such as group projects should become easier within time. Keeping organized with certain techniques should also come easier with time as I receive more and more responsibility through my high school years.
I feel that with time I'll reach my desired self through many ways. Those ways cannot be foreseen since life holds many undiscovered paths. I feel that when the time comes I'll make decisions that will help me in later in the future. There's no way to guarantee the choices you'll make or their outcomes, so why ponder the unknown until it's an absolute.
"His paintings don't tell stories.'"(91)
Through my high school years, there will be many obstacles to overcome to help me reach my desired self. I wish to put myself out there in uncomfortable situations so that I can get more used to them. "Strangers would think I was calm."(1) I need to show more of my personality in an open environment instead of my select group of friends. Things such as group projects should become easier within time. Keeping organized with certain techniques should also come easier with time as I receive more and more responsibility through my high school years.
I feel that with time I'll reach my desired self through many ways. Those ways cannot be foreseen since life holds many undiscovered paths. I feel that when the time comes I'll make decisions that will help me in later in the future. There's no way to guarantee the choices you'll make or their outcomes, so why ponder the unknown until it's an absolute.
What a nice way to portray such good qualities! I see the determination in your eyes. I believe you and Griet have similar characteristics to more or so staying calm around strangers, which I admire dearly. I say keep that determination, move forward and be who you are. Throughout life, you will learn. By the time you graduate, just think of the wonders you can create! You have a lot ahead of you.
ReplyDeleteRachel! You are so much like Griet and so independent. Ive known you for so long, but we're finally friends! I know that you won't let anything stand in your way until you reach your dreams. I believe in you so much and I believe that someday, maybe even tomorrow, you will be known all around the world for who you are.
ReplyDeleteI love the quotes that you used. You did well with explaining your self!
ReplyDeleteRachel~! You're always so kind and accepting of others. You and I have only known each other since the seventh grade, but honestly I feel that your picture truly shows the person I've come to know you as. I feel like I've said that in a lot of these comments, but it's true. Everyone seemed to incorporate their current selves into their future ideals, you especially. I truly believe that you will be able to reach your aspirations as long as you still stay true to you.
ReplyDeleteRachel- Your paragraphs are so nicely put together! I love how you said that you need to work on showing your personality to people other than your friends because i think that is something many people need to work on. It is most certainly not a bad thing though! I am excited to be in classes with you these four years because I want to see if you will truly fulfill your goal!
ReplyDeleteRachel- I am so glad to have meet you all those years ago, you are more than a sister to me. I still find it creepy that you and my sister have the same first and middle name, same natural hair and eye color, and taste in music. You guys are too much alike! Now on to the paragraph. I love how your paragraph states that you are going to change, and that you want to change. Everyone faces obstacles in their life. Some are harder than others. And others can last longer than some. But everyone has the ability to pull through, but it is those that choose not to that don't make it across. Greit was one of the people who chose to pull through. Did she have some help, yeah sure she did, but you will to. whether its Me , Lizzie, or even yes I'm saying it, John. And trust me you dont want to do everything on your own. That did not end well for me. I hope high school isnt the worsst time of your life cuz i know it wont be the best. Good Luck sis.
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